Monday, 20 May 2013

Why Suki & the Christmas Treasure Trove should be published – and a sample chapter...

I sent the following text to Salt Publishing to see if they wanted to publish this great novel. They read it and then said no. But that's no reason why other publishers shouldn't publish it. Here's the case for somebody publishing Suki & the Christmas Treasure Trove:-


Suki & the Christmas Treasure Trove

Category: Literary fiction

Summary:-
Suki lives in a quiet, English coastal town with a strange group of friends. Chirpy has a big secret and so does Edward, Suki's toy bear. But when they discover another dimension in an ancient mirror and an eccentric old man from the past called Honkworth O'Dibley, their routine lives are turned upside down when they find themselves in a creepy, timeless world with Marcia Congleton, Suki’s arch-enemy.
Returning home proves troublesome for the group of reluctant time travellers who, guided by a strange little man with a helium voice, must first find a mysterious old woman called Granny Gherkin – who exists in the past, the present and the future.
Having found her they are introduced to Joseph, a lonely boy living with her in a remote lighthouse. Peechu, another of Suki’s friends, who reached the strange lighthouse in the bay long before the others, in an inflatable raft, accompanied by Edward, has befriended Joseph.
When they jump through another magic mirror, provided by the sinister Granny Gherkin, Peechu grabs Joseph and they all find themselves aboard a doomed airliner plummeting towards the cold North Atlantic Ocean. Will they return Honkworth O’Dibley safely to the nineteenth century? Will they get back to the 21st century? What happens to Joseph? Is he dead or alive? And what about Peechu? Does he have a secret? Or is he merely haunted by the old woman and the seemingly tragic life of his new friend, Joseph?

Biography, MJ Moggridge
MATTHEW JOHN MOGGRIDGE was born and bred in Sutton, Surrey. After studying sociology and English literature, he embarked upon a career in business journalism. As a magazine editor, he has travelled the world, reporting on subjects as diverse as bulk handling and [drum roll...] potato processing, but in the main writing about food and drink. He is currently travelling the world again, writing about aluminium, but lives in suburban South Croydon with his wife and two children where he enjoys cycling at weekends and blogging – but he’s not a geek. Suki and the Christmas Treasure Trove is his first novel.

Here are six reasons why Suki & the Christmas Treasure Trove should be published.

1. There is plenty of potential for other Suki adventures.

2. The book appeals to all ages.

3. It would make a great motion picture and there’s also merchandising opportunities.

4. There’s a lot of humour surrounding characters like Honkworth O’Dibley, PC Gorringe and Edward, Suki’s toy bear.

5. While not a ‘festive favourite’ kind of novel, it could enjoy success in the lead-up to Christmas.

6. It’s not a ‘hard read’ and has likeable characters.

The penultimate chapter from Suki & the Christmas Treasure Trove – the penultimate chapter.






Chapter Twenty-four


S
UKI WAS AWAKE and it was still dark. The green glow of the digital clock provided the only light and, like a moth, she was drawn towards its sombre, smouldering glow.
The house was quiet – too quiet. She lay on her back, staring at the ceiling, trying to work out its area by counting the polystyrene tiles and then confusing herself when she tried to tot up the halves and quarters and got hopelessly lost.
The battle was on; did she remain in bed or admit defeat and go downstairs pretending to herself that she needed a glass of water?
There were no easy answers to be found in the dead of night, nothing and nobody to counter an argument, just silence and the hissing in her own ears.
And then she remembered Edward and smiled as the memory unfurled. If Edward were here, she thought, there would be no loneliness, but he was nowhere to be seen; she didn’t even know if he was still alive, out there in the ether, in another dimension of space and time. What was he doing right now? Where was he? That was the hardest question of all.
She flung back the duvet and swung her legs gracefully out of the warm bed, her feet touching the soft carpet that covered most of the floor. For a while, she sat on the edge of the mattress, her head bowed, not in shame, but sadness. She never realised it was possible to miss somebody as much as she missed Edward.
Edward was much more than a toy to Suki; he was something special and she knew that only Peechu would understand her loss – her grief. He was, after all, the only one of her friends who knew the secret.
She stood up and moved towards the heavy curtains, behind which there was a bay window and a small triangular area of exposed floorboards.
She recalled a distant memory of hiding behind the curtains to escape the wrath of her mother; and even though she was still a child, that recollection haunted her as she stepped into that world again.
It was too dark to find her slippers – and turning a light on was out of the question. Besides, she liked the illusion of being in outer space, even if she was in her bedroom. Soon, her eyes grew accustomed to the darkness.
She approached the curtains and parted them, stepping through from the relative opacity of outer space into a world illuminated by the halogen glow of street lights.
It was a clear night, full of twinkling stars and the afterglow of Christmas Day. The streets below her bedroom window were empty. Cars slept in the gutters; cats cast scary shadows on the pavement.
Suki was glad to be at home and not in the mad world of crashing planes and weird lighthouses. Scanning the skies for the diamond lights of an airliner, she found herself wondering about Joseph. What had become of him and Edward?
Then she remembered: they were probably dead, along with all the other passengers on that stricken, ill-fated aircraft. Sadness forced her to look down at her bare feet on the black floorboards. Memories. Flashbulb moments. Deep inside, Suki was relieved that she and her friends had tricked the devil.
She raised her head and resumed staring out of the window. Outside, all remained quiet, but something had disturbed the tranquility of the early morning.
Whatever it was, it had moved fast. Suki was puzzled and rubbed her eyes in disbelief. Perhaps it was a trick of the light or just early morning weariness.
She began to think about returning to bed, crossing back into outer space and treading a careful path to the warmth of her bed. Except that, by now, it would be cold.
There was an unseen presence in the room. She turned and pressed her back into the bay window, expecting something to come flying towards her, but nothing came.
Suki advanced towards the heavy curtains and gently parted them, not daring to think what she might find on the other side. She made her way back to bed, in the dark, and covered herself with the duvet.
Peering out, she saw a shadowy figure standing by the door and gasped with fright. “Who’s there?”
Panicking, she reached for her bedside lamp and fumbled for the switch; but when the room was bathed in light, the figure had gone, leaving the door ajar.
Suki breathed a sigh of relief, as if glad that she had been dreaming; but it was not a dream. Perhaps she had been sleepwalking, but no, the reality was simple: the frightening figure by the door had been real.
There was no alternative other than to pursue the intruder. She jumped out of bed again and put on her dressing gown, which had been hanging, corpse-like, behind the door. Cautiously, she moved on to the dark landing, expecting to be attacked at any moment, but nothing untoward happened and she found herself standing alone, staring into the void of night.
As she crept downstairs, she heard voices and saw a flashing light, like the beam of a lighthouse, through the stained glass windows.
Blurred figures murmured outside and she heard a familiar voice, but couldn’t quite place it.
Suki advanced towards the front door and tried to see more by pressing her face against a stained glass window. Her vision was distorted and she saw not one, but several faces – and they all belonged to PC Gorringe. The flashing light from his squad car illuminated the hallway and behind her the mirror was glowing.
“Now you be on your way home, sonny,” said PC Gorringe.
“Yessir,” said a quieter and even more recognisable voice.
Suki heard footsteps and assumed they belonged to PC Gorringe – they did. A door slammed, an engine spluttered and the squad car drove away.
Suki opened the door, convinced that she would find the owner of the quieter voice standing in the garden.
“Hello?”
No answer.
“Is anybody there?”
Still nothing.
She looked around and then began to close the door.
“Suki?” said a voice, at last.
There in front of her stood the shadowy figure she had seen in her bedroom.
“Chirpy?”
He stepped out of the darkness.
“I’m sorry, I was feeling restless at home,” he said.
“Do you want to come in?” It was cold outside and she began to shiver.
“It’s late, I’d better get home,” Chirpy said, awkwardly, his head bowed as if ashamed.
Suki was confused. She wanted to know why Chirpy had ventured out in the early hours to visit her. “You can come in for some tea if you like,” she said. “Or you can stay; it’s nearly morning.”
“You’re probably wondering what I was doing in your room,” he said, guiltily.
“Yes, I am; you frightened me.” Suki was curious, not suspicious.
“I didn’t mean to; I just thought you might fancy a night flight, that’s all.”
They were still standing on the doorstep in the cold, their freezing breath like exhaled cigarette smoke.
“Come in,” she said. “We can go to the kitchen, nobody will hear us.”
Chirpy advanced towards her and crossed the threshold. Suki closed the door behind them and they walked along the darkened hallway, past the glowing mirror.
“It’s active,” said Chirpy, still feeling a little embarrassed about being there.
“Yes, it is,” she replied as they headed towards the kitchen at the end of the hall. “But I think we’ve had enough adventure for one day, don’t you?”
Suki flicked a switch and fluorescent lights spread a hesitant brightness across the room. It reminded Chirpy of lightening, but there was no thunder.
The kitchen had at its centre a large oak table surrounded by matching fitted units.
“Take a seat,” Suki said.
Chirpy dragged out a chair and sat down.
“I couldn’t just go home and sleep,” he said, playing with a coaster that had been left on the table.
“Why not?” asked Suki, her back turned as she rinsed out a couple of mugs at the sink.
“Because of everything that’s happened, I guess,” replied Chirpy. “It’s not every day that you travel through time.”
“We’re all time travellers,” said Suki, philosophically, dropping a couple of teabags into the mugs. The kettle purred as it heated the water.
Chirpy spun the coaster like a coin. It landed cork side up and he wondered whether it was heads or tails. He decided it would have to be heads. Flipping it over, he examined the pattern on the other side.
“Where did you get these?” he asked.
Suki walked towards him carrying two steaming mugs of tea. “The coasters? Mum picked them up at a craft fair. They’re made by some forgotten tribe in the Amazon, I think,” she explained, placing the mugs on the table, but not using the solitary coaster.
They sipped their tea until Suki broke the silence. “So, remind me, why were you in my room?”
“I told you: to see if you wanted to fly.
“In the middle of the night?”
“It was early morning.”
“But still, I was asleep and it was dark.”
“No, you were awake, looking out of the window.”
“Yes, but, you know what I mean; for all I knew you could have been a burglar.”
“I’m sorry.”
“What did PC Gorringe want?”
“He must have seen me loitering outside.”
They sat in silence, finished their tea and then Chirpy stood up. “I’d better be going,” he said, yawning.
Minutes later, Suki waved goodbye to him at the door. “I’ll call you later,” she said and he disappeared into the dark.

On the other side of town, PC Gorringe had parked his squad car in one of the rickety garages behind his apartment block. He trudged wearily towards an iron fire escape that led to his front door, three floors up.
On the landing, he fumbled for his keys and then searched for the right one to insert in the lock.
He smiled as he walked through the front door and into his small lounge. His shift was over and finally he had time to open his Christmas presents. He remembered a bottle-shaped parcel on the table; it was a single malt whisky from his mother. Every year she bought him the same present and now that he was off-duty, he looked forward to a glass while he watched the sun rise.
He didn’t feel guilty or in any way ashamed of drinking so early in the morning. As a shift worker, he was in a completely different time zone to those who worked normal hours.
A battery-powered carriage clock on the other side of the room chimed five. The timepiece was a birthday present from his mother, one of those landmark occasions he’d rather forget. Whenever it chimed, he was reminded of his mortality – and it saddened him.
The lounge was sparsely furnished with an imitation leather sofa, matching armchair and pine coffee table. A large television was crammed into the remaining space. On the table, a single place-mat betrayed PC Gorringe’s solitary lifestyle. An oil painting of a lighthouse lashed by choppy seas adorned one of the walls and there was a small sash window.
Whisky bottle in hand, PC Gorringe headed for the window, which afforded a splendid view across the rooftops to the sea.
Enjoying a small snifter, after clocking off, was part of his daily routine and he rarely left the flat without ensuring that a clean tumbler was on the table awaiting his return.
He sat down and began to unwrap his present, but something was wrong – he was still wearing his uniform.
He stood up and made his way to the bedroom, where space was at a premium. Fitted wardrobes didn’t help and, as his mother often said in a slurred, intoxicated voice whenever she visited, ‘there’s no room in ‘ere to swing a cat’.
There was a small space between the bed and the window and it was here that he began the tiresome – and often dangerous – task of changing into his pyjamas. The process involved hopping on one leg, losing balance and falling over. Today was no exception. In fact, PC Gorringe’s consistency was beginning to annoy his neighbours, the Danzigers, who lived in the flat below.
The Danzigers had three children under five years old who slept in the bedroom below PC Gorringe’s. They rarely had an uninterrupted night, but when the children finally fell asleep, at around four o’clock in the morning, Mr. Danziger knew that he had to make the most of the next two hours before his alarm rang. The last thing he wanted to hear was the thunderous, crumpling sound of a 17-stone policeman tottering, losing balance and crashing to the floor, but it happened, as regular as clockwork, and was invariably followed by the sound of crying, wide-awake, babies.
PC Gorringe emerged puffy-cheeked, red-faced and flustered from the bedroom, having picked himself up from the floor. His uniform now hung on the back of the bedroom door and he was wearing another present from his mother – a pair of pink and white striped pyjamas.
When he wasn’t working the night shift, and could turn in at a decent hour, PC Gorringe often woke up in the middle of the night and thought there was an uninvited policeman in his room – until he realised it was his own uniform hanging on the back of the door.
As he made his way back to the easy chair and his single malt, he stopped. Could he hear the sound of children crying? Or was his imagination playing tricks with him?
“Thank the Lord for Mum,” said PC Gorringe, smoothing the material of his pyjamas appreciatively as he made himself comfortable in the chair. He was a true mummy’s boy and his rotund figure owed plenty to his mother’s iced fairy cakes and hearty meals.
As he resumed opening his present, the rustling of wrapping paper disturbed the peace. Pulling the gleaming whisky bottle from the mass of colourful, seasonal paper was like delivering a baby, thought PC Gorringe, recalling a distant and mildly humiliating memory from his early career. He unscrewed the cap and poured the peaty, golden liquid into the tumbler. For a second, he considered rising from his chair again and fetching some ice from the freezer, but why ruin a single malt whisky?
PC Gorringe savoured his first mouthful and smiled with satisfaction as he recalled his day. It had been pretty uneventful – the Christmas night shift was always the same. Everybody stayed in and watched the television – apart from the strange boy he had seen just before clocking off. Why, he wondered, would somebody so young feel the need to wander the streets at such an ungodly hour?
The boy’s name was strange too, he thought: Chirpy. Who in their right mind would give their son such a silly name? He took another sip from the tumbler.
“Chirpy,” he said aloud, examining the shimmering contents of his tumbler. “Perhaps he’s a bird,” he thought with a giggle. “Perhaps he can fly!”
He took another sip and was beginning to feel nicely relaxed. Outside, it was still dark and the rooftops were silhouetted against the clear night sky.
As the whisky began to warm his soul, PC Gorringe could think of nothing better than watching the world come alive from the warmth of his lounge.
“Chirpy,” he said again. “The boy who could fly.” Now that’s what he should have done, he thought: written a children’s story about a magical boy who discovered he could fly. But then he remembered Peter Pan and smiled the smile of a defeated man. He took another sip
from the tumbler and resumed his gaze out of the window.
His lips had barely made contact with the rim of the glass when he almost choked. Outside, hovering high over the rooftops, but clearly visible, was the boy – Chirpy. He really was flying, prompting PC Gorringe to place the tumbler back on the table and rub his eyes in disbelief.
When he looked out of the window again, the boy was still there. PC Gorringe picked up the whisky bottle and checked its strength and then, on satisfying himself that his mother’s Christmas present was not the problem, and that perhaps his eyes were deceiving him, he rubbed them again after putting the bottle back on the table. The boy was still there, suspended in mid-air.
But PC Gorringe had a problem. Who at the police station would believe his crackpot story? The answer, of course, was nobody, so he reached for the whisky bottle and topped up his glass, toasting Chirpy in the process as he watched him disappear into the distance.

As Chirpy surveyed his surroundings, which consisted mainly of black rooftops silhouetted against the grey darkness of an early morning’s winter sky, he was unaware that behind the solitary window illuminated below him, was an astounded PC Gorringe. Had he known, he might have smiled.
Chirpy remained suspended in mid-air wondering what to do next; should he take off on a new adventure – one he had been secretly planning – or simply return home and get some sleep?
The idea of going home and climbing into bed was appealing, but he had to press on with his plan. Without further ado, he flew off and headed towards the harbour.
Sleep, he decided, was not an option – not yet, and besides, he could rest when his job was done.
To accelerate during his silent ascent, Chirpy streamlined his body by placing both arms at his side. It wasn’t long before he could look down on a familiar sight: the Sea Shells CafĂ©, boarded up for the night; and the eerie glint of the sea, reflecting a watery moon. The sea lapped silently against the harbour walls and Chirpy decided to land.
The harbour was deserted and he thought it was best to go now, under cover of darkness. He spent a few minutes listening to the clinking masts of the boats and then, bending at the knee, he pushed his body into the air again.
He flew high – higher than his previous excursions – and was no longer afraid. It was as if he knew that all would be well and that his magical powers would not desert him.
Soon, he found himself far out to sea with only the distant horizon for company. The darkness had lifted, the skies were blue and below him there was nowhere to land.
It dawned on him that something else, some invisible force, was controlling his flight path and that he had no way of stopping it. Despite flying so high and at incredible speed, he seemed to be protected from the elements: he couldn’t feel the cold winter air on his face and felt safe in the hands of whatever was pushing him forward.
Soon, he noticed objects floating on the surface of the water. As he began to descend, he realised they were suitcases and items of clothing bobbing on the swell. Fragments of fuselage, plastic bottles, magazines and aircraft seats covered a wide area.
He was gliding, only feet from the water. Ahead of him he spied a bright orange life raft with a sloping roof.
As he drew closer and hovered silently overhead, he could hear voices.
“You are assessed for street repairs: £40 per house; £115 per hotel,” said one voice.
“You’ll have to mortgage your stations,” said another, quieter voice.
Chirpy had yet to perfect his landing technique. He hit the raft heavily and its occupants began to shriek.
The sound of a zip being unfastened was followed by the figure of a young boy peering out. It was Joseph.
“Chirpy?”
“Joseph?”
“Have you come to rescue us?”
“I guess I have,” said Chirpy, sounding vague and baffled. “How many people are in there?”
“Er, well, just me,” said Joseph, awkwardly, as if he had something to hide.
“But I heard voices. You were playing Monopoly.”
“We were, until you crashed into the raft and sent all the pieces flying.
“Who’s ‘we’, who were you talking to?”
“Just the bear.”
“Edward? Suki’s toy bear?”
“Yes, I know it sounds crazy, but being alone in a life raft in the middle of the ocean is enough to give anybody cabin fever, don’t you think?”
“I suppose it’s better than talking to yourself,” Chirpy suggested.
“A million times better,” said Joseph, surveying the wreckage of the airliner as it floated past.
Inside the raft, Edward had been listening to their discourse and, quite frankly, he was getting annoyed. There was no point in pretending any longer, he thought, poking his head out of the raft, much to Chirpy’s surprise.
“Yes, it’s me, Chirpy, and I can talk. I’m a magic bear and I’ve been hiding my light under a bushel for too long,” said Edward, glad that he had revealed his secret at last.
“What’s a bushel?” asked Joseph.
“I wish I knew,” said Edward.
“It’s an old word for bowl. I read about it at school,” Chirpy explained.
Edward and Joseph nodded, feigning knowledge they didn’t have.
There was a momentary silence, which was broken by Chirpy. “We ought to be going. There’s a storm’s brewing.”
“Go where?” asked Joseph.
“Back to dry land, of course.”
“What about the others?”
“The others?”
“The other survivors – from the plane.”
Chirpy’s silence said it all. He turned to Edward.
“Suki thought she’d lost you forever.”
“Thanks to you, Chirpy, I will return to her today.”
Chirpy smiled and prepared himself for flight.
“Now, hop on – both of you – we’re going home.”





Sunday, 5 May 2013

I smell a rat...

Chatting to a pal of mine earlier today, he informed me that he went on to Amazon to buy a copy of Suki & the Christmas Treasure Trove only to discover that, some days after placing the order he received an email stating that they were out of stock and the order had been cancelled.

This is very strange. It's odd anyway. If you Google Suki & the Christmas Treasure Trove, very often the on-line bookseller states that it has, say, four new copies and four 'used' copies. Now, that's quite odd. As far as I know, nobody (unfortunately) has bought a copy so how does Amazon (and other on-line sellers) get hold of 'used copies'?

Anyway, if you really would like to read Suki & the Christmas Treasure Trove, the best place to get it is from the publishers, who are Create Space in the USA.

Here's the place you need to go: click here!!!!

Saturday, 4 May 2013

Melancholic euphoria – now there's an emotion!

There's so many things to say about Suki & the Christmas Treasure Trove, because there are so many themes, some prominent, some underlying. The novel is bleak in places, dark in others, and while it's unspoken, it's a novel defined by certain pieces of music. I'm listening to one such piece of music now, as I write this and, where it fits in, I'm not sure, but I know it's towards the end, on a beach, which, ironically is similar to the title of the compilation album from which the track is taken: Staring at the Sea by The Cure.

In Between Days is the track in question, particularly the opening drums and the crashing introduction, like waves hitting the sand. The track is both sad and euphoric and that in so many ways, defines the novel and the  character of Peechu who we see at the end of the book, alone on the beach, flying his kite on a windy Boxing Day morning.

While the book has its funny moments, there is a melancholy thread that runs throughout. By the end of the story, the melancholy turns to euphoria, but euphoria tinged with something, an uncertainty for the future, perhaps, I don't know.

Whether anybody else shares these feelings of mine, I don't know. When I wrote the book I wanted to convey something, an emotion that I've been feeling for a long time, and I think I did it, but whether it's an emotion that others can detect and share or feel themselves, I don't know.

All novels are open to interpretation and I'm sure different people will read Suki & the Christmas Treasure Trove and perceive it in different ways.

M J Moggridge

Monday, 22 April 2013

Suki & the Christmas Treasure – now widely available on-line

Hi,

Just to say that my novel Suki & the Christmas Treasure Trove is now widely available on-line.

If you want to read it, click here for a direct link to the novel's Amazon page. 

A word of warning! Don't buy the Kindle version. Buy the hard copy print version as it is the final edit.

Suki & the Christmas Treasure Trove is an original piece of work. It would make a great Christmas movie and it's a little different, I like to think.

The novel originated out of stories I told my daughter when she was eight years old. Then one day I decided to write a novel using the same characters and the result was Suki & the Christmas Treasure Trove.

I'm thinking about sequels – or other adventures – for Suki and her friends. In fact, the big debate in the house has always been 'should it be sequel?' or 'should it be a completely new adventure?' I'm thinking the latter and have a few ideas in my head.

In Treasure Trove we never hear about Suki's father. Does she have one? Well, yes she does; he's just a bit wayward, a bit of a traveller, a space cowboy. Perhaps he should take Suki and her friends on a completely new adventure. I'm constantly pondering this.

If you read Treasure Trove, let me know your thoughts.

Matt.